Movie poster

[Adad]

So I've been thinking about making a movie about Adad's awakening, not the same as my biography as I am unhappy with it, but a good story about what it's like to wake up and become an angel.  I'm still working on a plot and messing with shooting with FRAPS in game but thought I'd make a movie poster while no one was on tonight.  So, I ended up with 2.  

Now I'm not that good with Photoshop yet, but I think they turned out ok.  I'm looking for tips from those who are more skilled, especially on the words in the code as I'm not sure if they're readable without straining your eyes.  

Also, everyone give me your thoughts! I prefer the second one.

[Anonymous]

Brief sexual content?  W00T!  LOL

Anyway, tone down the title, it's too obvious, and space it out a little more

[Anonymous]

why is it brief?!  sheeeeez...

[Adad]

OK, minor changes to the text but still not enough.  I want the font from the Revolutions poster I'm working from, but can't find it.  Anyone know what it is y chance?  Also, which do you guys like better, or neither?

[Eroz]

Shouldn't that bottom one have signatures or something?

[Adad]

What do you mean?

[Anonymous]

Almost bankgothic? http://www.mazedude.com/fonts.htm though I guess it's more 24

[Phienyx]

That bottom poster is perfect!  I would just suggest doing something graphic with your bluepill name and your awakened name.  No other images needed.

[Anonymous]

And clean up those jagged edges

[Adad]

How do I get rid of the edges??? Any ideas for the names phienyx?

[Anonymous]

Take a better screenshot!  Oh man, I'm so funny I kill myself

Try a soft blur in Photoshop I guess, I normally go over them with a very fine blur pen but I suppose this is something those arty types should answer

[Anonymous]

I like the one I believe Phienyx was referring to that had no pic and it was simply yet "THE SHIT". Make sense?

[Adad]

Better?






PS Wood - Uh, the one with no picture is an actual poster for Revolutions...
so, you'd prefer something like this?

[Phienyx]

As far as names, What is your "bluepill" name?  

For example, my character's bluepill name is Alexander "Zannder" Kayne.  My awakened name is Phienyx.

An idea sould be to have your bluepill name, but in a foreground shadow have it form your awakened name.  Or have your bluepill name in white in the foreground and have your awakened name in larger, less defined glowing green text behind it.

I'll toss you an example of what I mean when I get a little bit of time later tonight.

[Anonymous]

I like them all, mostly because I can't do this even if I tried. The second one (the one with your character standing there and the wings sticking out) looks awesome, and it is my favourite.

Mm, Phienyx, nice sig by the way...HOW COME I DON"T HAVE ONE YET!?

Btw, WHERE is SARED!?