Holovid Feedback

[Tbone]

Why not lose your name at this stage. Just say "I am the leader of the furious angels"

Because when I say my name is when all the Tbone fangirls squeal with delight!

[Adad]

The Furious Angels is or are a group of people too concerned with grammar.

[Ghisteslwchlohm]

In other news: The entirety of American-English is bullshit.

You mean, The entirety of American-English are bullshit!

Haha I jest, please take no offense.



But I think we could find a way around the grammar problems by just rearranging the structure of the words and completely avoid this problem altogether.

[LAZARUS]

It's not a problem to begin with. Isn't there further pressing matters than grammar?

[Manic Velocity]

It's not a problem to begin with. Isn't there further pressing matters than grammar?

Doesn't you mean "aren't there further"....... ooooooooh ho ho HO!

[LAZARUS]

Well played.

[Tbone]

Ok, I'm hoping this is the final or very close to final version of the Holovid. Re-recorded the audio with my new mic:



Edit: Not reflected in this upload - fixed the small click heard at the end.

[Ragnarok]

I have to say that I like it a lot, especially the tone of your voice.

[LAZARUS]

Damned near perfect, T. I absolutely love it, and the audio quality and the music is completely spot on. Great job.

[Erathaol]

I, too, really enjoy this final version of the holovid.  Excellent work, boss!

[Tbone]

Thanks guys. 15th time's the charm!

[Fuse]

Much better. Hate "This is TBone" and "the Furious Angels IS" still rubs me the wrong way.
Otherwise, not bad.

[Saint]

Im not a fan of "This is TBONE!" but other than that, very nice..

[Tbone]

Like Star Wars doesn't have weird names. "This is Jar Jar, leader of annoying side characters". Vader, Revan, Chewbacca, Jabba, Boba, Han, Yoda...I think Tbone fits right in! Hell, the oddball is plain ol "Luke".

Would it be better if I said "Commander Tbone". "This is Commander Tbone, and the Furious Angels is my favorite guild in the galaxy!".

Maybe I should just say "This is YOUR NEW MASTER!". Then we trap them in a force field! Gwahaha! Must...resist...dark side...

[Saint]

or...how about  whos your daddy?      nah for me it was more the tone or voice inflection seemed off to me.. like you were maybe trying to hard to sound like MR. T from the A-Team    

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqJE5TH5jhc&feature=related


ps. ok i listened to it again later and either its a different version or im getting used to it.  I may have been over harsh.  Its not bad